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Just a light drabble about a fateful day in a young girl’s life; written to clean up a detail that dates back to when I created Kara for my very first fanfic.


FOUR FRIENDS: Appointment


Her father wanted to come along, but Kara said “No way”. He wasn’t her watcher; besides, she didn’t want any watcher at all.

Tara, who was her watcher, just smiled, and said everything would be all right.

Dana was scared, and didn’t want to go near the place.

Bottie was also scared, and insisted on going in with Kara, but when they called Kara’s name she would let Buffybot go no further.

After all, Kara had been through this before. Besides, she’d fought vampires and demons -- what was the big deal about having her braces taken out?

The dentist agreed.

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adriana_is
May. 25th, 2006 06:14 am (UTC)
that was sweet! I liked that!
ozma914
May. 25th, 2006 06:52 am (UTC)
Glad you liked it! I don't tackle drabbles often -- I'm too long winded -- but they're lots of fun when everything falls into place.
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ozma914
May. 25th, 2006 06:49 am (UTC)
Twist is my middle name! (Well, okay, Richard is my middle name, but still ...)
redwolf
May. 25th, 2006 11:39 am (UTC)
The trauma!

You have a stray e in the opening line.
ozma914
May. 26th, 2006 03:37 am (UTC)
re: stray E
Eeek!
cbtreks
May. 26th, 2006 12:22 am (UTC)
Very nice - I liked it. (But I'm confused because I thought Kara's father was her watcher.)
ozma914
May. 26th, 2006 04:12 am (UTC)
Uh oh ... something's wrong, here ...
He was, originally; but somewhere along the way (I don't recall which chapter), mention was made that Richard was busy teaching, and Tara was offered the job. Wait, let me check back ...


EEK!!! I NEVER POSTED THE FIRST FOUR "FOUR FRIENDS: STORIES ON LJ! Unless they're hidden away somewhere, I started posting with "Dana's Secret", which is chapter 5 on my fanfiction.net site. Giles offered Tara the watcher's job in chapter 3.

Well, that would explain your confusion ... sometimes I can be such a dork. :-/
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